Guess who?
It has been almost three months and I didn't write a single poem, God knows why but I just couldn't write.I was not happy about it. Seeing me in low spirits my friend Gauren sent me this picture around 2 am and asked me to write a poem on it, I had no clue who this man was and I asked my friend to tell me about him but he insisted me to write first and then promised that he'd tell me. I managed to jot down few lines, they are not that good but it definitely helped to me gain the vibe I had lost and after I wrote few lines Gauren told me about this man and I hate myself for not recognizing him without the get up. I've watched him my whole childhood and I was unable to guess who he was. Let me know if you guessed it right. It is a free verse.
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Pinch of pain but peace at the same time, what can I rhyme for these bewitching eyes?
Bags filled under with dreams and wishes. Lips parted they smiling of tired cliches.
Can you see through this well suited man? Inside him reside a soul with no life span. On the right, no left!
Somewhere in between is his heart right working, full perished but clean.

i don't really appreciate free verse but, this one is really spectacular :) :D keep it up sweetheart!!!
ReplyDeleteHey, I am glad that you liked it. Thank you (:
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ReplyDeleteThe opening and closing were really awesome ,kinda touched..
ReplyDeleteBut who was the man... ??
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DeleteThankyou :) and that is Charlie Chaplin.
Deleteohh shit never seen him like this :) thanks
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